2023.5.20 下午场 托福考题分析
Which of the following should the government to spend money to benefit city or region most?
A. Providing more affordable housing
B. Decreasing air and water pollution
C. Attracting new businesses to the city or region
破题
下午场的托福考题重复2021.7.10上午场原题,又是政府类!已经说累了,今年大概就是政府类元年吧,出现比例大大提升,还在备考的同学一定要准备点政府类的素材,平时也多练习练习!
下面,我们就来看下之前写好的考题分析吧~
这场的考题是新题,政府类的三选一,虽然题目是新题,但和2016.5.22的老题(写作营day 16练习)比较类似,如下:
Which is the most important thing for a country leader to assure the prosperity of the country?
1. Create more jobs for unemployed workers;
2. Improve the agriculture to ensure the low price of food;
3. Increase access to affordable house.
如果练过这道题的同学,应该比较熟悉,能发现其实这道新题除了第二个是改成了环境相关,另外两个几乎只是变了种说法,都是可以套用的。
最后提醒下,三选一题一定注意在全篇范围内,将三个选项都要踩到!
头脑风暴
破题时,如果大家觉得每个都挺重要的,不太好说,那么可以想象出一个具体的城市,比如你生活的城市,或者你比较了解的城市(比如北上广这些大城市),针对这个城市去进行选择,就会更容易选出最需要改进的那个,也更容易写出具体、细节的内容。
一、提供更多更廉价的房子
好处:
① 更多人能安居乐业,生活压力更小。
② 居民们更多的钱可以用在消费上,带动当地市场发展。
坏处:
① 廉价的房子如安置房,时常环境不太好,没有人愿意去住。
② 廉价的房子一般地处偏远,不方便,没有人愿意去住。
二、减少空气和水污染
好处:
① 提升整个城市的环境,更加宜居。
② 长期来看,对居民的身体健康有帮助。
坏处:
① 减少污染是件很困难的事情,很难快速见到成效。
② 减少污染可能会影响到经济发展。
三、给这地区招商
好处:
① 增加工作岗位,让当地居民都能有工作安居乐业。
② 增加工作岗位,吸引外来人才。
③ 增加收益,有更多的税收去建设这个城市。
坏处:
① 可能会带来环境污染,对当地居民身体健康造成威胁。
② 可能会招来失败的投资,浪费钱。
参考思路
立场:
选C, attract new business to the city or region
1. On the one hand, new business generates abundant job opportunities, creating a much more vibrant regional economy. // This is mainly because when those new companies, like star tech startups, come to a certain city, 他们会吸引或留住retain很多人在这个城市。
With a higher salary, these clusters of talents would spur the local community’s prosperity and equity.// Take Chengdu for example. After several-year continuous efforts, the local government of Chengdu has brought in some well-known internet companies like Tencent to have a branch office here. As those tech giants settle in, 那个片区的人才越来越密集.
To meet their demand, 那个地区的infrastructure越来越好:fancy shopping malls, better education systems, and great housing options. In a word, 如果没有这些科技巨头的加入,成都不会像现在这么有活力。
2. On the other hand, the other two options are either ineffective or impractical. // For one thing, providing more affordable house may turn to be a waste of money. For instance, to alleviate civilian’s financial pressure, my hometown has provided 很多廉价的房子。但因为价格低廉,这些房子一般都在outskirts,距离大多数人工作的地方很远。Even worse, since 他们远在郊区,那些地方治安也不好,人员混杂。Therefore, until now, 那里也有80%的房子是空置的。
// For another, to combat pollution is usually much easier said than done. Admittedly, 为了长期的生态平衡和人类的身体健康,formulating careful regulations like monitoring factories’ emissions of toxic chemicals is a must. However, this practice takes time to see the result, which also often has an adverse impact on the economy. 如果只是把钱花在保护环境上,这个城市最终很有可能变成无人问津的小山村。
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