G类雅思写作外教范文：怎么用英语写信退货？

今天，给大家带来一个G类雅思写作范文。老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，Mac范文

3，范文朗读

4,雅思范文解析

上题：

You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged.

Write a letter to the retailer to complain.In the letter:

–Explain why you are unhappy

–Request a refund

–Make arrangements to return the damaged item

审题：

• Type类型:formal正式
• Key words关键词:reason/request refund/make arrangements to return item

To Whom It May Concern:

On the 23rd of this month,I purchased one of your‘air-tight’rice containers,model number XV824.It arrived yesterday,and after unpacking,I decided to test as per the testing method shown in the video on your retail product page.The method suggests filling the container up to the quarter-level mark,and then turning it upside down to ensure no leaks,both of which I did.However,after turning it upside down,it leaked.It seemed to only leak in the area between the two back hinges,and though not substantial,it is enough to cause a concern that this is a place where cockroaches may enter the container,which is precisely the reason for buying the container in the first place.

After repeating the test and having the same result appear,I must,unfortunately,request that the payment amount be returned and that you can assist in booking a courier to pick up the product.

The order number and receipt are attached.Thank you very much for your understanding.

Best regards,

Aaron Schmitt

-Essay Analysis范文解析-

Standard Phrases:

• To Whom It May Concern:
• On the(date)of this month,
• The reason for(doing sth)in the first place
• (I)request that the payment amount be returned
• ---are attached
• Thank you very much for your understanding.
• Best regards,

Vocabulary高分地道词汇和短语：

• air-tight密封的；不透气的
• containers容器
• model number型号
• as per按照
• retail product page零售产品页面
• the quarter-level mark 1/4处
• to ensure确保
• leak漏（水）
• hinges盖子
• substantial重大的
• to cause a concern引起忧虑
• cockroaches蟑螂
• precisely正好；恰恰
• assist in帮助
• booking预订
• courier快递
• order number单号
• receipt收据

Coherence and Cohesion(C&C):

• ,and after
• ,I
• The
• ,and then turning it
• ,both of which
• However,
• ,it
• ,and though
• where
• ,which is
• After repeating
• and having
• ,unfortunately,

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